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- Anything by Rick Riordan. BEST. AUTHOR. EVER. - Kingdom Keepers series by Ridley Pearson. - Fablehaven and Dragonwatch series by Brandon Mull. No matter what I do, I can't decide on whether I'd want to be fairykind like Kendra or a shadow charmer like Seth! - Simon Vs. The Homo Sapiens Agenda by Becky Albertalli. - Peter and The Starcatchers by Dave Barry. The story is a prequel to Peter Pan, and it's actually way better than the original (in my honest opinion). - Princess of The Midnight Ball trilogy by Jessica Day George (one of the TABC drill sergeants!!!). A retelling of the classic fairy tale 'The Twelve Dancing Princesses'. The two sequels are based off of 'Cinderella' and 'Little Red Riding Hood'. - Lunar Chronicles series by Marissa Meyer (another drill sergeant). Everyone else on this forum has recommended it, so I shall too! (Haha. But seriously, it's a great book and you should definitely read it.) - My Life In Pink And Green trilogy by Lisa Greenwald. Kind of stereotypically girly, but still a good book. - Princess Academy trilogy by Shannon Hale. I like this because instead of the main character marrying the prince (bo-ring), her best friend marries him instead! - Meg, Jo, Amy, and Beth by Rey Terciero and Bre Indigo (I think). The story is a modern retelling of Little Women by Louisa May Alcott, in a graphic novel format. - Strange Birds by Celia C. Perez. - The Stars Beneath Our Feet by David Barclay Moore. I read this purely because the cover had LEGOs on it, but it ended up being a really great story! - Way, way, wayyyyyyyy too many to list!!!!

So, far my book is doing very good. I just need some critique for it, some ideas for lengthening, dialouge, and I'll be ready to publish! Here is the link: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Imbzx0VeniLQ0TIMqbVbXMiKmlT7RVkhb1ziGORQDNk/edit?usp=sharing Thanks!